Monday, November 9, 2009

Muse On Line Writing Conference 2010

It's time to sign up for next year's Muse OnLine Conference. This is one writing opportunity you don't want to miss. This conference is the brain child of Lea Schizas and Carolyn Howard-Johnson. A large number of talented writers, editors, publishers, and agents donate their time for a week to offer live chats and forum workshops in a variety of writing areas. This year, as in past years, there have been sessions devoted to web site building, writing for the trades, children's writing, world-building, improving your writing skills and a number of other sessions to improve your writing. New this year were live sessions where you could pitch your novel directly to a publishing house such as Damnation Books, White Rose Press, Wild Rose Press, 4RV Publishing, Twilight Times Books, and others.

Next year's conference will be held October 11 - 17, 2010. Only those who register and follow Lea's INDIVIDUAL EMAIL request will get updates throughout the year about upcoming new workshops and pitch sessions she'll be hosting in 2010 before the 2010 Conference.

To register go here:

http://ca.groups.yahoo.com/group/2010MuseConferenceRegistration/

Saturday, November 7, 2009

Read It Out Loud

Today, I read Hope Clark's latest Funds for Writers newsletter. In it, she wrote an editorial listing things one should do to make their writing improve. While her thoughts were not new, they are ones which should be remembered. Briefly, she mentioned reading your work out loud; making a print copy instead of reading on the computer; take a break from the work and look back at it later; read your printed copy someplace other than your work area; use a thesaurus; and edit one area of your project at a time - e.g. first grammar, then sentence structure, then voice, etc.

What struck me as a great idea, and one I didn't know existed, was the possibility of having your work read back to you when there is no one around to listen. There exists a web site, www.readplease.com. Here you can paste your manuscript into the provided blank, then sit back and listen to your work as it is read to you. If you're like me, you may be shy about reading your "baby" to someone else. Yet, I've learned the importance of hearing your work read out loud. Here is a way not to feel intimidated by reading to someone else, but the experience is greater than simply reading (or whispering) the words to yourself. Try it and see.

Thanks, Hope, for this tip.

Wednesday, November 4, 2009

What Do You Do When You're Stuck?

Okay, I have to admit, I'm stuck. I'm working on the sequel to my middle grade novel, Ghost for Rent. When I wrote the original book, I had several people say they'd love to see my young sleuths tackle more ghostly mysteries and that they could see a series. This sounded reasonable to me and I began work on the second book, Ghost for Dinner.

We live in an area of high paranormal activity. Several of the older buildings around town, including the high school, what used to a notions shop, a restaurant, and a few houses have had ghostly sightings. It's easy to see where my MC could take on another "mystery." I decided the restaurant was the next place to go ghost hunting, but I wanted to tie it to my first book, which had left one skeleton in the closet, so to speak.

I've woven in back story and moved the plot along until Wendy arrives at the restaurant and the ghostly happenings begin. Unfortunately, I seem to be "stuck." I'm not comfortable with novels, as I'm more used to the short story. I'm finding it difficult to give my MC enough problems to make the story interesting. I'm also having a problem getting the ghost from the restaurant back to Wendy's house where they found the skeleton in the first book. A skeleton not associated with any of the ghosts haunting Wendy in the original story.

All of you who write for middle grades or young adults, what do you do when you're stuck? I have put the manuscript aside a number of times and have written short stories, craft articles, non-fiction articles, and two picture books, but I keep coming back to my middle grade ghost novel. I want Wendy to solve this next mystery. How do I get back on track? Any ideas? Thanks.

Monday, November 2, 2009

Guest Blogger, Terri Main, "Beyond Writers Guidelines"





Today, we have a guest blogger, Terri Main, author of Creative Calisthenics, a wonderful book filled with tips to "jump start" your muse. I reviewed this book a few months ago and I'm still impressed with Ms. Main's ideas. Below are some of her thoughts on the best way to study a magazine to ensure article acceptance. Read through to find a link to a free guide to help you with this process.

Beyond Writers Guidelines:


One of the old chestnuts of wisdom about magazine writing is to study the publication. However, rarely do you hear anyone tell you how to do this. Too many writers, with good intentions, just read, take random notes and end up more confused than when they started. Like anything else, if you have a plan you will do better. So, here is a simple plan for studying a magazine.

Start with the Cover. Editors design covers to attract readers. What they feature most prominently on the cover tells you what that editor considers to be the most interesting articles in the magazine. Write down the name of each article featured. Put a star by the main article featured. Go through several back issues doing this. Do you see a theme emerging?

Study the Table of Contents. Look down the table of contents. Make a list of each article. Mark off those written by staff writers and ones likely to be written by freelancers. Categorize the topics like: health, home improvement, food, cars, celebrities, etc. Again look for patterns. Also, note the columns. Are they written by the same person each month or do they have different “guest” writers? Those “guests” are probably freelancers.

Study the Articles. What is the average word count per article? What type of leads do they use (story, statistics, quote, etc)? Do they use pictures? What is the article structure or type such as: how-to, problem exposition, persuasive, celebrity profile, Q&A interview, etc. Once again look for common patterns. Editors reveal their preferences through the articles they publish. These preferences are often not even known to them and will never appear in the writer's guidelines.

Study the Photographs. What type of photos do they have with the articles? Were they stock photos or ones likely provided by the author? Were they of people, scenery, activities, processes?

Study the Advertisements. Advertisers know their market. You can find out a lot about the readership by looking at the ads. Are the models glamorous or more like everyday people? What products are being sold? What type of people would use those products? What appeals are being made such as economy, quality, status, utility, safety, altruism, etc.

I can see you saying this is a lot of work. And your point is? Of course, it is a lot of work, but if you do this type of work, you will know that publication as well, if not better than the editor, and dramatically increase your chances of selling to them, To help you do this analysis you can download forms at either http://www.creativecalisthenics.com/marketing.doc or http://www.creativecalisthenics.com/marketing.pdf

Terri, thank you for stopping by and sharing this valuable information.

Friday, October 30, 2009

Ghosts and such

Tomorrow is Halloween. It's the time for ghosts, goblins, vampires and such to take to the streets and school or church sponsored parties.

Instead of eating candy, gorge yourself on a good spine-tingling book. Stephen King and Peter Straub come immediately to mind.

This is where I do a little horn tooting and suggest my own, Ghost for Rent. This middle grade novel is perfect for reading on Halloween or any other day when your son or daughter, ages 9-12, might be looking for a little taste of a paranormal mystery.

Check out my web site: http://www.pennylockwoodehrenkranz.yolasite.com for an excerpt and reviews. Or, go straight to Hardshell Word Factory for a print copy of Fictionwise for download. It is also available in Kindle at Amazon.

Happy Halloween.
Ghost for Rent:
http://www.hardshell.com/ProductInfo.aspx?productid=0759910057
http://store.fictionwise.com/servlet/mw?t=book&bi=8656&si=42
http://www.amazon.com/Ghost-for-Rent-ebook/dp/B000FCKHD8/ref=cm_cr_pr_product_top

Thursday, October 29, 2009

Interview with author Marilyn Meredith





Today as my guest, I'm pleased to talk with the talented Marilyn Meredith. Ms. Merdith has agreed to answer some questions about her books and the writing craft.

1. Marilyn, would you first tell us a little about yourself and what led you to a writing career?

I've always written--stories and plays when I was a kid; as a young adult and mom, plays for my Camp Fire Girls, PTA newsletters, then my first novel, an historical family saga based on my own family genealogy. That was the first book published--but took a very long time to get to that point. I wrote a second family saga based on the other side of my family too. After it was published, knew I wanted to continue writing, but wasn't sure what. Decided on mysteries since that's what I loved to read.

2. What is your writing process?

When I'm starting a new book I begin gathering materials about some of the subjects I think I might like to write about. I think about what I'm going to write, jot down notes and information about characters, but I don't really do a detailed plot. When I have enough to get started, I try to think of a good place to begin and I sit down in front of the computer and write.

I try to write every single day except Sunday. Mornings are my best writing time, but when I really into the story, I might write whenever I have a free hour or two.

I read every chapter to my writing critique group. I think of them as my first editor. I do a lot of rewriting too.

3. How did you become interested in writing mysteries?

I sort of answered that in the first question. I've always loved mysteries and it seemed like the logical next step in my writing career.

4. Does mystery writing have certain rules a writer should follow? What are they?

Yes, of course. The rules about writing well apply to mystery writing too. That's why there are so many books about writing and writing mysteries.

The biggest rule for mysteries is to play fair with the reader. The reader ought to know as much about what is going on as the sleuth and be able to try and figure out who the guilty part is--though it's always fun to surprise the reader.

5. In Dispel the Mist, Tempe eats out and cooks a lot. Why do you feel food is so important to your story telling?

I like to read about food in books--in fact it irritates me when food or eating is never mentioned in a book. In real life people are always wondering what they are going to have or fix for dinner. Tempe isn't much of a cook--but her husband Hutch is.

6. Tempe Crabtree is Native American and you have set this series on a fictional reservation. What are your ties to Native Americans and have you spent time on a reservation?

We live very close to the Tule River Indian Reservation (the reservation that I borrow from for my Deputy Tempe Crabtree mysteries) and in fact, I can see the back of the mountains that is part of the reservation from my house.

I have a great-grandaughter who is a quarter Tule River Indian, and a daughter-in-law and granddaughter who are part Yaqui. Except for the fact that they are all beautiful, I know they are not any different from the rest of us because of their Native American blood.

7. How do you research your books?

My research is different for every one of my books. For Dispel the Mist I learned about the Hairy Man and was fortunate to be able to go with the college's anthropology class to visit the Painted Rock to see the pictorgraphs. Once I saw these 500 to 1000 years old drawings, I knew I had to write a story about Tempe that incorporated the Hairy Man. Often the idea comes first, something that intrigues me, and I do what research is necessary after that.

8. You've published a number of books. What other genres do you write and which is your favorite?

Besides the historical family sagas, I've written ghost stories, psychological horror, and Christian horror. Whatever I happen to be writing is my favorite at the time--but right now mystery is my favorite.

9. Are all of your books published with Mundania Press, and how did you find your publishers?

I've had many publishers over the years. Right now Mundania Press is publishing my Deputy Tempe Crabtree mysteries. I met the publisher at a writing conference and asked him if he'd be interested in publishing the series. This was after the first publisher passed away.

Oaktree Press publishes my Rocky Bluff P.D. crime series. The previous publisher decided to cease her business. I'd met the Oaktree Press publisher at a conference and asked her if she'd like to publish the next book in the series. I spoke at a conference she was giving, and I signed the contract while I was there.

10. Do you have an agent, and do you think an agent is important for new writers?

Over the years I've had several agents, but don't have one now. Because I'm with small, independent publishers, I don't really need an agent. But if an author wants to be published by a larger New York publisher, an agent is the only way to get one. Because I kept writing books and wasn't getting any younger, I decided finding a publisher myself was the way to go for me.

11. What is your marketing technique, and, if you don't mind my asking, how much of your own money do you spend promoting your books?

I do a lot of online promotion like this kind of interview. I'm on Facebook and Twitter and other social networking sites. I belong to MWA, Sisters in Crime, Epic, and the Public Safety Writers Association.

I go to conferences and conventions every year--my favorites are Epicon, Mayhem in the Midlands, PSWA's conference, and next year I'll be going to Bouchercon again. I also like Left Coast Crime, but haven't attended for a couple of years.

Book and craft fairs and festivals are also favorites of mine. I love speaking at libraries and for service and social groups.

When I go out of town, of course it's expensive if I have to fly and stay in a hotel. My hubby often goes with me and it seems like a vacation.

12. I see you are an instructor for Writers Digest School. How did you become involved with doing this?

I'm no longer working for them, but I was an instructor for ten years. I loved it. It's been awhile, but I believe I applied and was accepted more or less like any job.

13. Where can readers find out more about Marilyn Meredith?

My website: http://fictionforyou.com has lots of information on it. Also I have a blog:
http://marilynmeredith.blogspot.com and I try to blog every day. I also have a monthly newsletter and if anyone wants to subscribe she/he can write to me at: mmeredith@ocsnet.net and put Newsletter or Subscribe in the Subject.

14. Do you have any tips for new writers hoping to become novelists?

Learn as much as you can about the craft of writing. Read the kind of books you want to write. Then write, write, write--and rewrite until it's as perfect as you can make it. When you are at the stage where you're ready to submit to an agent or editor, read their guidelines carefully and submit exactly the way they've asked.

Marilyn, I appreciate your taking time from your busy writing schedule to share this information with me. Thank you.

Wednesday, October 28, 2009

Review Dispel the Mists






REVIEW
Dispel the Mist
Author: Marilyn Meredith
Trade Paperback ISBN: 978-1-59426-402-3
eBook ISNB: 978-978-1-59426-403-0
Published by: Mundania Press LLC
www.mndania.com


Dispel the Mist, is another intriguing mystery in the Tempe Crabtree mystery series, written by talented author, Marilyn Meredith. While this is part of a series, the book stands alone. Dispel the Mist immediately pulls the reader into the problem at hand and keeps up the pace for a suspense-filled adventure. Ms. Meredith weaves a story, peopled with believable characters, delightful aromas, and credible scenery.
Set in an around the fictitious Bear Creek Reservation, Tempe is a deputy sheriff reassigned from her usual job handing out parking tickets to a possible murder investigation. High profile Supervisor Lilia Quintera drops dead from what appears to be a heart attack. Since she was a healthy, active woman with no history of heart problems, the local police decide to launch an investigation.
As Lilia was half Indian, lead detective Morrison, calls in Tempe believing her own Native American ancestry will be a help in getting answers to several troubling questions. Lilia has made several enemies both in her support of a group home for developmentally disabled people and her non-support of a proposed Indian owned and operated resort complex. As Tempe delves into the problems surrounding Lilia's death, she finds Lilia's husband, as a former nurse, is the prime suspect. Other people, however, have motive and access such as Lilia's sister, Connie, the antagonistic group home neighbor, Duane Whitney, and Tempe's own mentor, Nick Two John.
Tempe is troubled by dreams of her grandmother and the legend of the Hairy Man, a mythical creature who together with the other animals was responsible for the creation of man. Tempe seems no closer to solving the mystery of Lilia's death when she gets a strange phone call warning her to stay away from the Painted Rock. A trip to visit old friends on the reservation includes a visit to the Painted Rock where Tempe is surprised to find a pictograph of the Hairy Man and has an olfactory vision of wood burning and food cooking. Why would someone warn her away from this spirit filled area? Why is she having these dreams of the Hairy Man?
As the book draws to a close, Tempe receives a call to return to the Painted Rock, apparently from Detective Morrison's assistant. It's dark, the roads are narrow and winding, a thunderstorm is brewing. What will Tempe find at the Painted Rock? Is it really Detective Morrison waiting for her? Has he found out who killed Lilia Quintera? Does Tempe have an unknown protector? Read Dispel the Mist for the surprising answer to these and other questions.
If you enjoy Dispel the Mist, look for the other Tempe Crabtree mystery books.